We've read your manuscript "Holiday Season" and decided to pass on it for the following reasons:
- Present tense, no matter how you wrap it, is not our style
- Whoever/whatever you're using that whip on, we don't support animal cruelty and we don't publish x-rated erotica
- The title is too ambiguous. In future, perhaps clarify by using the name of the holiday around which the season is based
- "Ho," no matter how many times it is said in immediate succession, is a derogatory term that we strive to avoid
Thank you for submitting to Hope Publications. We look forward to reading more from you in the future.
Chris T. Mas